tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6145298560011119245.post5314217622601317483..comments2024-03-22T11:14:13.300+05:00Comments on कस्बा qasba: मैं ख़्याल हूं किसी और काravish kumarhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04814587957935118030noreply@blogger.comBlogger12125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6145298560011119245.post-22672204059406544912013-06-10T05:25:51.817+05:002013-06-10T05:25:51.817+05:00Bahut badiya sir jii....Bahut badiya sir jii....Vicky Rajputhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10325986910668471718noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6145298560011119245.post-19757931788075579132013-06-08T14:42:39.649+05:002013-06-08T14:42:39.649+05:00बढ़िया लिखा है रविश भाई ... एक शेर हमे भी याद आया ...बढ़िया लिखा है रविश भाई ... एक शेर हमे भी याद आया है, हालाँकि इस ग़ज़ल से कोई राफ़्ता नहीं है| मुज़फ़्फ़र वारिस का कलाम है ...<br /><br />'चेहरे पे मल रहा हूँ सियाही नसीब की<br />आईना हाथ में है सिकंदर नहीं हूँ मैं . . .'<br /><br />Hypocritically Yourshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06649982732159529310noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6145298560011119245.post-43650149872343960092013-06-08T10:09:26.651+05:002013-06-08T10:09:26.651+05:00likha kisne hailikha kisne haiMahendra Singhhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02983305155812215864noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6145298560011119245.post-1099897649129048842013-06-08T08:29:36.095+05:002013-06-08T08:29:36.095+05:00GoodGoodAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11772697901168285349noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6145298560011119245.post-5475427506590448852013-06-08T08:29:01.344+05:002013-06-08T08:29:01.344+05:00GoodGoodAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11772697901168285349noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6145298560011119245.post-54366089828008900222013-06-07T21:52:22.035+05:002013-06-07T21:52:22.035+05:00अजब भीड़ है कि यहाँ सब अकेले हैं. अजब भीड़ है कि यहाँ सब अकेले हैं. बाबुषाhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05226082344574670411noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6145298560011119245.post-66739438924512910332013-06-07T21:29:02.758+05:002013-06-07T21:29:02.758+05:00मैं ख्याल हूँ किसी और का कि मैं ख़याल हूँ किसी और क...मैं ख्याल हूँ किसी और का कि मैं ख़याल हूँ किसी और का ?<br /><br />मीटर बिगड़ रहा है, रिदम टूट रही है सो पहले ही टोक दिया.<br /><br />अब आगे का पढ़ते हैं.बाबुषाhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05226082344574670411noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6145298560011119245.post-7568958642415312222013-06-07T21:27:14.807+05:002013-06-07T21:27:14.807+05:00This comment has been removed by the author.बाबुषाhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05226082344574670411noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6145298560011119245.post-90061931565542832812013-06-07T21:19:16.542+05:002013-06-07T21:19:16.542+05:00gazal ka aisa vistar ! sadhuvad bhaijigazal ka aisa vistar ! sadhuvad bhaijiAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11224614116421282097noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6145298560011119245.post-87813844270516808462013-06-07T20:24:56.725+05:002013-06-07T20:24:56.725+05:00This comment has been removed by the author.Hypocritically Yourshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06649982732159529310noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6145298560011119245.post-73657047382279180482013-06-07T16:15:29.303+05:002013-06-07T16:15:29.303+05:00ji Ravish bhai, Yahi to ada hai lekhan ki. Bat kah...ji Ravish bhai, Yahi to ada hai lekhan ki. Bat kahne ki. Sahara to hai munni begam ke gajal ki, lekin bat kisi or se ho rahi hai. bahut khub. Sir, asha or umeed par hi duniya tiki hai. Kabhi Kabhi apki baton me nirasavadi soch jhalkne lagti hai. Eisa hona nahi chahiye. Mujhe lagta hai apki lekhni me wah dam hai, jo padhne wale ko kahin na kahin aapki hi abhivyaktiyon ke ird gird ghumne ko majboor kar deti hai. aapne sach kaha kabhi kabhi main bhi sochta hu abhivyakti aapki, soch aapki, vichar aapke phir ham jase commentbaj ko yeh kasa adhikar ki aapko gariya den ya phir aapki alochna karen. Lekin yeh sach hai ki jab ham public domain apni bat ko sajha karne lagte hain to kahin na kahin yeh umeed to rahti hi hai ki jara dekhen samne wale ne kya socha, kya samjha or kya sajha kiya...acha laga sir yeh bhi...Awadhesh K Jhahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14827085496225161159noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6145298560011119245.post-43717773287073319652013-06-07T14:58:39.941+05:002013-06-07T14:58:39.941+05:00नमस्कार सर जी! पढ़कर अच्छा लगा !!!नमस्कार सर जी! पढ़कर अच्छा लगा !!!@aryarajuhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14115388861163761098noreply@blogger.com